Comments on: Tomorrow

By: Now, With Melody | silentYak

Now, With Melody | silentYak — Sun, 23 Nov 2008 04:06:19 +0000

[...] few days ago, I wrote a poem that I called ‘Tomorrow.’ Now, Vaibhav Garg (DAIICT’s cherished song-writer) has given it a tune of its own. [...]

By: Incorrigible Introvert

Incorrigible Introvert — Fri, 21 Nov 2008 17:51:30 +0000

The bed is lovely, soft for sleep,
But I have promises to keep,
And blog posts to write before I sleep,
And blog posts to write before I sleep.

cheers

By: Aruna

Aruna — Thu, 20 Nov 2008 20:39:18 +0000

The end justifies the means…doesn’t matter what was your motivation behind writing those poems, but we enjoy them

By: RRI

RRI — Thu, 20 Nov 2008 16:05:53 +0000

@Aruna, you _do_ realize I composed those poems mainly because I liked to write in that nice big register?

By: Aruna

Aruna — Thu, 20 Nov 2008 07:33:55 +0000

I love love love your poems!

Last time was at home in Bombay, rediscovered your old notebook of poems, written when you were like 9–10, we all had a good time re-reading them, before packing them away safely

By: haru

haru — Thu, 20 Nov 2008 07:12:26 +0000

made my day.. was smiling through the whole poem. and ofcourse very well writtien

By: arun

arun — Thu, 20 Nov 2008 06:53:40 +0000

*clap* *clap*

By: RRI

RRI — Thu, 20 Nov 2008 05:16:35 +0000

Neither…imagine yourself falling asleep: things pop into your head, one thing morphs into another, and nothing really makes *sense*. I was in that same state when I wrote this.

By: Nilopa

Nilopa — Thu, 20 Nov 2008 05:07:24 +0000

sweetly vague
did u use green coz u really see it as the color of things unseen? or was it just the rhyme value?